Kitana from mortal kombat, pin-up - updated

A commissioned pin-up of the beat-em up character.
I was asked to color her with a much more neat gradient, somewhat like the anime (keeping my own drawing, though).
I'm not satisfied, more like disappointed, especially of the inking, I'll wait for his reply (and yours, if you would).

Ah, I preferred the old MK2 costume, but not perfectly identical...

Kitana, Mortal Kombat ©Ed Boon e John Tobias, Midway Games


Edit: looking at this pic, I saw more than some mistakes and I forced me to take the time to adjust it... Hope it looks batter...

Edit: Once again, I found this pic unsatisfying and correct it... for now, I'm afraid...
Here's the old version comparison 
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